Thunder encroached,
Devastation beckoned;
Ripples in potholes,
Leather held feet emerged;
Eyes, swollen pumpkins,
Pearls exploding;
Shattering the earth,
Ominously clattered clouds;
Feather light footsteps,
Declining to touch mud;
Fell down, a splash heard,
Stomach tore apart;
Nails dug into earth,
A scream escapes;
Laughter explodes,
Stillness reminds of grave;
Affinity to nothingness,
Amidst thunder.
gud one!
ReplyDeletegreat dude....
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"Pearls exploding;
ReplyDeleteShattering the earth,"...
I liked these lines very much..the spark in your words are yet unheard. Make it visible and audible to the million-zillion seekers who are wandering in wild in the constant hunger of some real writings.
Please explain the poem Bro!...it is out of my comprehending ability. Or either it is my nothingness in the field of yours.
grave expressions... i find syivia plath in u bro..:)
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